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Old 04-12-2013, 09:26 PM   #11
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Great idea!!! He could try to eventually stand up to the bully
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Old 04-12-2013, 09:27 PM   #12
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Red Foo: the leader of the tank. He's been alive longer than anyone. If you know him he dislikes you. If he doesn't know you he hates you. He has battle wounds but wont tell anyone what their from.
In the end Jaws could ask Red Foo why he hates him so much. And he could reply he is jealous of Jaws young age and his naive behavior. He missing being young and it was naive behavior that gave him wounds.
fantastic ideas, can you email me at mitch.wilkinson@sky.com for more conversations, i will give you updates and if possible get some help when i am stuck?
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Would you want to alter or drop any characters or add new characters?
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Red Foo: the leader of the tank. He's been alive longer than anyone. If you know him he dislikes you. If he doesn't know you he hates you. He has battle wounds but wont tell anyone what their from.
In the end Jaws could ask Red Foo why he hates him so much. And he could reply he is jealous of Jaws young age and his naive behavior. He missing being young and it was naive behavior that gave him wounds.
i'm starting to think i could make the intro about how he lived in a tank with his parents until he was in his teenage stages, but both of his parents died and the owner didn't want him in the tank and decided to give him to a very close friend, Jaws had only ever thought there were his type of fish out there, but when he got into his new tank, his life when tipsy tursy. how does this sound?
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i would like some more characters, like his parents and his owner's names, how about any crustaceans? thank you very much for this help
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Old 04-12-2013, 09:35 PM   #16
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Red Foo: the leader of the tank. He's been alive longer than anyone. If you know him he dislikes you. If he doesn't know you he hates you. He has battle wounds but wont tell anyone what their from.
In the end Jaws could ask Red Foo why he hates him so much. And he could reply he is jealous of Jaws young age and his naive behavior. He missing being young and it was naive behavior that gave him wounds.
That's a great idea!!!! Don't like the name tho lol maybe something like dawn or shadow or something dark and eery.
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That's a great idea!!!! Don't like the name tho lol maybe something like dawn or shadow or something dark and eery.
i think he chose red foo because old goldfish originated in oriental countries (china, japan, hong kong)
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i would like some more characters, like his parents and his owner's names, how about any crustaceans? thank you very much for this help
Parents hmmm........ that's a hard one

But maybe instead of Red Foo: it could be Night Hawk!

As for crustaceans maybe a fiddler crab? Named Clause? If you google fiddler crab, it could you give you ideas on the character personality.
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i think he chose red foo because old goldfish originated in oriental countries (china, japan, hong kong)
I am a she
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how about the fiddler crab is loyal, he was found living in a ship wreck and found when the owner went diving, he is terrified of new fish and has a phobia of starfish and algi, he is the most solitude in the tank, and it takes a lot to get him to talk to you, and when you do, he is always miserable and brings up his dream of going back to the ocean and marrying a lobster
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