I have a 220g with 2 monster swords but since I want them to stay within a certain size area so as not to block light from strem plants I merely keep all leaves cut off that go outside that area. I keep the sword that is about 1/3 of the way over into the tank looking long and tall. No small or draping outside leaves. The plant doesn't take up space I need for stem plants, it doesn't shade, and mostly it give a strong verticle accent. Plus I have 10 angels and I need my swords for them to spawn on. Swords are the 1st choice for laying.
I liked the fullness of the first picture, but understand why you wanted to rescape. I too just removed some plants and added in more color using Nesaea pedicellata 'Golden', Rotala Wallichii, and expanding my plantings of Rotala macrandra. My tank looks so wierd right now with 2/3 of it having big mature plantings and then the other 1/3 being newly planted stem cuttings. Have you thought about putting an accent (rock/s or DW) behind and to the right of the dwarf sag (looks like sag but can't see for sure)?
You'll have to post a couple pic's once your scape fills in!