1 line Poetry

[virus]

Hey all this is a cool idea i picked up from this web site! its alot like the word games except more versitility !

Here are the rules

1.You may write only 1 line of poetry per post
2.must either relate to the last post or rhyme with it!
3. you need to let people have turns so your only allowed to post after someone posted after you
4. HAVE FUN, and be creative!

Start!
Mind and fish swim in my mini world

 

[GIMojo]

this game is too hard lol

 

[austinsdad]

Sounds like fun..... but "world". That is a hard word to rhyme with. :?

I'll check back after some easier words are available. It's early.

 

[cJw]

I vote we quote the last line posted as well...

Mind and fish swim in my mini world

glorious in beauty and limitless in creation.

 

[austinsdad]

Oh. I get it now. I was thinking Muhammed Ali type poetry.

 

[cJw]

It's either directly relating to the last line posted OR it has to rhyme... and it's all casual; no grading here.

So if it's sucky, hopefully we can at least laugh @ it.


Am I understanding this thing right, Virus?

 

[austinsdad]

Oh I REALLY see now. #2 above makes it clear.

Quote:

Mind and fish swim in my mini world

glorious in beauty and limitless in creation.

Still, I am left to ponder...

 

[cJw]

I'd say the next line would have to do with the first line, OR somehow rhyme with creation...

ie:

Wild colors and wilder shapes, flashing... (relating to the first)
or
Left and right, up and down, constant motion... (almost rhyming with the second)

This could be fun, but may actually :gasp!: require thought.

 

[austinsdad]

may actually :gasp!: require thought.

That leaves me out.

 

[cJw]

I said 'MAY' require thought; you don't have to put anything into it. That's the nice thing about art; it takes as little or as much as you give it and still 'works'.

 

[smallfry]

so where are we at???

 

[austinsdad]

The least I can do since messing this up....

Left off with the following:

"Mind and fish swim in my mini world

glorious in beauty and limitless in creation. "

 

[Meredith]

The least I can do since messing this up....

Left off with the following:

"Mind and fish swim in my mini world

glorious in beauty and limitless in creation. "

Life and color mingled and swirled

 

[cJw]

the sails of life had slowly unfurled.

 

[virus]

ok heres the deal on the 2 rules, you have to relate with the lst post or ryme this is rhyming like so

"The sails of life slowly unfurled" you take a word and ryhme it
"from my childhood it remains a spiritral World"<-- see how i rymed it and made it
also
The sails of life slowly unfurled
"takes me back to memorys of the deep"

p.s. HTH and here is a good page that helps with ryming etc. http://rhyme.poetry.com/r/rhyme.cgi?

 

[virus]

bump?

 

[cJw]

the sails of life had slowly unfurled.

Only swimming life in this wet, wet world...

8)

 

[virus]

Only swimming life in this wet, wet world...

bringing in new life to this world, lip curled