So changes are as follows. I moved the main hardscape forwards about 2 inches. Leaned the rocks back a touch and curved them round more. I also shortened the Monte Carlo by about 5 inches.
This allowed more open space at the back for me to make a path leading down with a raise on the right and side which is slightly lower than the main high behind the tree. This low raises platform will be planted and so will the path. The path will lead into the open area where another plant will congregate.
Hopefully you can see the contours and raises from the pictures. The raise gives a move 3D effect from front to back. Once planted this should be made more clear.
I personally think it looks better although it doesn't look like I have done much.
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I'm hoping it's a slightly different approach from some of the latest aquascapes. I know paths are used a lot in Japanese style scapes but are often sparsely planted whereas paths used in Dutch themes are planted well I'll be using less stems.
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